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Tried another guy.  I'm pretty pleased with him except maybe his hands.  :critiqueplz:  And no, no, I wasn't experimenting with wrinkles!  :secretplz:

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Dolly

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PostedJanuary 02, 2015, 02:39:09 PM
Width × Height1000 × 1301
Filesize158 KB
FilenameSCAN0089..JPG
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Last EditedJanuary 05, 2015, 05:49:26 PM
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sarah_yt

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Comment #1 - Posted January 02, 2015, 03:22:05 PM
Nice job, Dolly! I can definitely see your art improving :D

Also, good job on the hands - even though they aren't perfect, the size of them is more realistic than your previous drawings (hands are usually the same size as the face).

For critique - when drawing wrinkles, try to think more than just lines. Think about shadow and crumpling fabric. Use reference pictures (they seriously help me!) to see how the wrinkles form, and try to capture some of it with shading and lines together.

here's a reference picture similar to your picture:
http://static6.depositphotos.com/1167812/653/i/950/depositphotos_6533449-Young-man-in-blue-jeans-and-shirt.-Studio-shot-over-white..jpg

Notice how the lines form in his jeans only when because they are casting a shadow? Trying to mimic that will  help the wrinkles feel much more realistic and 3D.

:D Keep it up!!

Roach Sinch

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Comment #2 - Posted January 02, 2015, 07:12:03 PM
Great job Dolly ^^

Dolly

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Comment #3 - Posted January 02, 2015, 07:24:37 PM
Thanks guys! ;D Sarah, thanks for the critique.  I'll try to remember about the wrinkles.  Especially thanks for the ref!
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