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Offline Foreign Grid

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Re: Loglines
« Reply #15 on: August 23, 2016, 11:46:29 PM »
Cairn is a Citizen with no goals in life and Goldie is a Kharstan with one goal in life. For some time, tensions have been growing between the primitive Kharstan and the vast empire of the technology savvy Citizens, what will happen when the worlds of these two collide?

Or something idek
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And then theres

There is a labarynth, ever shifting and ever changing. What would it be like to call it home?
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Re: Loglines
« Reply #16 on: August 27, 2016, 07:38:05 PM »
Cairn is a Citizen with no goals in life and Goldie is a Kharstan with one goal in life. For some time, tensions have been growing between the primitive Kharstan and the vast empire of the technology savvy Citizens, what will happen when the worlds of these two collide?

Maybe make this one shorter and only focus on one thing. I'm no expert but maybe something like.

With tensions between the primitive Kharstan and the vast empire of the tech savvy citizens, two people, one a privliged underachiever and one, well, not, - dont know how to do the rest sorry but im just about out of ideas on this one what do you think?

how would you finish that up?

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Re: Loglines
« Reply #17 on: August 30, 2016, 10:37:22 PM »
In a world where humans and elves live side by side, a war is waged causing chaos and division. One girl, born of both human and elvish blood strives to find her place in this world as she learns to find faith and trust God in the midst of hardship, judgement and prejudice. 
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Re: Loglines
« Reply #18 on: August 30, 2016, 11:29:31 PM »
May as well share the logline of a story that isn't Mortality. XD

Science & Magic:

"In a fairy tale world where magic is the thing that kingdoms thrive on; one kingdom is on the verge of collapse due to over-dependence on the dying commodity. In the midst of this crisis, one mad genius sets out on a journey to prove to the world that this new thing called 'science' may indeed be the key to his homeland's salvation; with the help of his inventions, and his new friend--the teenage princess!"

It sounds much better than that in my head. >.<;

Also, in this world, magic is like soulless energy; it has no spiritual significance.
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Re: Loglines
« Reply #19 on: September 05, 2016, 09:54:36 PM »
In a world where humans and elves live side by side, a war is waged causing chaos and division. One girl, born of both human and elvish blood strives to find her place in this world as she learns to find faith and trust God in the midst of hardship, judgement and prejudice.


Wow this is actually a better logline than the story I made with a similar background. It was a modern-like world except there were elves. Let me know if you wanna collab or something! I really like the logline you have made.
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Re: Loglines
« Reply #20 on: September 06, 2016, 01:02:40 PM »
Oh thank you! 8D that is so very kind of you.
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Re: Loglines
« Reply #21 on: May 04, 2017, 03:39:36 PM »
Hey there! Thought I would revive this thread if I could.
If you guys have read what I said on the other side of the forum
http://christianmanga.com/smf/index.php/topic,4383.msg294121.html#msg294121
Here's a log-line I've been praying about...

Red riding hoodie (working title ^.^')
A girl goes on a trek to her grandmas house stalked by a werewolf disguised as a hunter.

 :critiqueplz:



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Re: Loglines
« Reply #22 on: May 05, 2017, 07:55:10 AM »
Hey there! Thought I would revive this thread if I could.
If you guys have read what I said on the other side of the forum
http://christianmanga.com/smf/index.php/topic,4383.msg294121.html#msg294121
Here's a log-line I've been praying about...

Red riding hoodie (working title ^.^')
A girl goes on a trek to her grandmas house stalked by a werewolf disguised as a hunter.

 :critiqueplz:



Hey there, Regina! I'm glad to learn which story you're praying about right now.

So this is going to be a different take on "The Little Red Riding Hood"? Will it be set in modern times? (I think it wood would be because you used 'hoodie.') How closely will you follow the fairy tale's plot? In what way do you think God has called you to write this?
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Re: Loglines
« Reply #23 on: May 05, 2017, 10:08:10 AM »
I like it! It could be the next snow white with the red hair!

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Re: Loglines
« Reply #24 on: May 07, 2017, 10:08:15 AM »
(Untitled)
A group of dimension hoppers travel between our plane and the [unnamed] plane battling the personification of various vices.

 :critiqueplz:

Feel free to tear this apart.

I've thought out some aspects of the hopping as well as major bad guys the good guys will face (all unnamed though), but I haven't decided on an ending.

P.S. It's not the spiritual plane; that's something else entirely, and an area none of the human characters can visit. Not sure what to do with dead humans. I think I'll leave them out.
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Re: Loglines
« Reply #25 on: May 11, 2017, 09:41:55 PM »

Here's a log-line I've been praying about...

Red riding hoodie (working title ^.^')
A girl goes on a trek to her grandmas house stalked by a werewolf disguised as a hunter.

 :critiqueplz:
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Hey there, Regina! I'm glad to learn which story you're praying about right now.

So this is going to be a different take on "The Little Red Riding Hood"? Will it be set in modern times? (I think it wood would be because you used 'hoodie.') How closely will you follow the fairy tale's plot? In what way do you think God has called you to write this?
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actually its based on a story i wrote about this girl who fell in love with the hunter from whole ordeal who was a nekko fox or something like that? idk i started writing this so long ago. ^.^ Actually I don't feel comfortable discussing the details in public like this but feel free to private message me if youd like to know! I only have a little bit of it that I saved from when I was 11. but I'm rewriting it to get me out a funk.
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Re: Loglines
« Reply #26 on: May 11, 2017, 09:49:25 PM »
(Untitled)
A group of dimension hoppers travel between our plane and the [unnamed] plane battling the personification of various vices.

 :critiqueplz:

Feel free to tear this apart.

I've thought out some aspects of the hopping as well as major bad guys the good guys will face (all unnamed though), but I haven't decided on an ending.

P.S. It's not the spiritual plane; that's something else entirely, and an area none of the human characters can visit. Not sure what to do with dead humans. I think I'll leave them out.

so is the plane our world? and yes leave the dead people out I think they will just confuse things.........could be a great analogy!
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